The first one is a re write (well I added a little cos I got my syllables wrong) - Thanks JC although I suspect there will be more.
Ice cream
Great glorious
mouthfuls of creamy luscious
Cold. Lick, lick, lick. Hmmm.....
Chocolate
Sensual oblong
cool, unsatisfying
object of desire.
Deprivation
It's so weird -
visualising bed; craving
sleep and dreams.
Bob's Philosophy
Bob said "Born to
be slapped and scream; die
screaming silently."
I don't know - are they better - maybe better meanings. Hope you enjoy and JC I don't mind if you check syllables and let me know.
dix
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