Please forgive me. This is my first attempt at an Haiku poem. What do I know about the form - that it consists of 17 syllables - 5 in the first line, 7 in the second and 5 in the third. That is my starting point and a game that my daughter got me for Christmas and I brought JC so that we can write Haiku together. Oh well hear goes - not sure this is right but it is an attempt.
Happy dancing, so
precious to swimming limbs in
my melodic time.
Dix
Should Haiku have a title if so, this could be something like Water Dancing. I think I have a way to go to understand the form but hey its a start.
Any suggestions or guidelines or is it back to my Stephen Fry book and Wikipedia!!
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