Tuesday 21 October 2008

More amazing young poetry



LONLINESS


Lonliness is pale blue

it tastes like spaghetti, boring and long.

Loneliness smells like a burnt-out candle,

it looks like rain dripping and dripping,

a boiling kettle boiling away.

Loneliness smells like air,

always there.


Natasha Fenn (11)

Breydon Middle School

Poetic Voyages

East Norfolk

Pub: Young Voices


I can't believe how amazing this is - never mind how young the poet is. I so hope this person is still writing, still creating.



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