Fat People Like Cake
Fat people like cakecreamy and bakedglazed hard with sugarthat crunches when bittenand sticks around the lipsto be licked and suckedlong after the cake has gone.But some fat people don't like cakeThey like hot sausage rollsthat melt in the mouthor fried eggs and bacon fatmopped up with bread.DiHA first draft but not sure where it is going - if anywhere
1 comment:
The title of this is great!
What you write is poetry. Don't let a couple of snobby teachers dictate your view of your work.
Keep going!
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