Wednesday 13 May 2009

Fat People Like Cake


Fat people like cake
creamy and baked
glazed hard with sugar
that crunches when bitten
and sticks around the lips
to be licked and sucked
long after the cake has gone.

But some
fat people don't like cake
They like hot sausage rolls
that melt in the mouth
or fried eggs and bacon fat
mopped up with bread.

DiH

A first draft but not sure where it is going - if anywhere

1 comment:

Just Curious... said...

The title of this is great!

What you write is poetry. Don't let a couple of snobby teachers dictate your view of your work.

Keep going!