Friday, 21 August 2009

Genesis fruits

Genesis fruits of juicy
5 edged shiny stars surround
Adam’s pip’d temptation
and earthly colours red and green
reign over on our continual existence.

DiH


This is something I have been playing about with for a while but not sure about it - would love some advice (what do you think?)

1 comment:

glnroz said...

i like short and ambigious poems or stories. This one can fit in any number of catatories(for me, lol). I finally got back from vacation. Where have you been off to?